Tuesday, April 9, 2013

My draft

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14 comments:

  1. It's very organized and easy to navigate. Only suggestion is that there is a lot of white space so maybe add some color whether it's black or some other color so that it breaks up the white.

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  2. I like the lines you use in the navigation. I like the the title is clearly posted at the front. There is a lot of white space, though, that you may want to move stuff around to fix.

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  3. I like the Nav Bar boarder/Navigation features.
    Nice use of whitespace.

    Needs more content.

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  4. I like the simple aspect of the site. Love the menu bar. The one that doesn't do it for me is the text of website it just boring.

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  5. Strengths:
    - The nav bar blue lines give it a very professional feel

    Area of Development:
    - A couple nav bar links are too close

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  6. Strength: It's very simple, which makes it easy to find what you need, the blue that you use in the navigation bar is very professional

    Work on: Adding more color to balance out your white space and add some padding to the navigation to make sure that the links are evenly spaced out

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  7. Clear navigation, and use of lines if very nice looking. I would be careful about using only black and white as a color scheme because the white can be very intense.

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  8. All of the content is there, easy to navigate and the rollovers Rock! Only suggestion would be to spruce it up a bit, give it a lil character :) You get to do the fun part now, you have all the structure there, now just color in the lines. Lookin' great!

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  9. Strengths: Super simple,easy to navigate

    Suggestions: Padding in the nav bar (especially between "experience" and "services" I agree that the colors are a bit harsh. And I agree too with the nav bar positioning. Vary the size too?

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  10. I like how in your navigation bar, it highlights where you're at. It's a very simple design and looks very professional. There is a lot of white space and the balance is a little off so maybe playing around with the layout might help with that.

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  11. It is very simple, but it is also very elegant. The blue and white and the double lines are nice on your links.

    Changing the font size of your header and the nav bar (one or the other) in order to distinguish from the nav bar and header.

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  12. I really like the lines on the nav bar for orientation
    Your design is very clean

    The contrast is a little rough on the eyes - maybe work to reduce scrolling.

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  13. The purpose is very clear and easy to navigate. The use of lines is very nice and with the nav bar telling you where you are is very cool. There is a lot of white and it is a little hard to look at. Also balance out the spacing between the header the nav bar and the page title.

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  14. Strength: Nav bar animation is pretty cool. I like how it identifies the page you're already on and animates on rollover.

    Suggestion: Alignment of elements in nav bar looks inconsistent at size on projector.

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